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To My Love

To my love,

You are the reason for everything.
The blooming flowers were inspired
By your hair flowing around your face.

The sunset is a reflection
Of the fire that burns in my heart
When you come walking toward me.

The great deep seas exist
As images of your eyes
Drawing me to you.

Everything I've created
Was inspired by the one thing
That matters most to me.

You.  You are my air.
I've died for you.
I live for you.
I pine for you.
I love you more than you can possibly know
Or understand.  Don't you know?
I, the One and only,
Am weak in the knees just thinking of you.
My heart races when I hear your name.
When you enter my presence, don't you see my blush?
I love your worship, but I desire your love.
You are the apple of my eye.
I love you always,
                I AM

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    September 2, 2007
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    This is a very good write. God bless you in all that you do. I hope you are doing well.


  • Red Rose of Light
    July 24, 2007

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    I'm slightly confused, are you speaking of your feelings for God or Gods feelings for us.
    Good job though.


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    July 21, 2007
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    Wow! Thought this was about some girl u fell in love with but it's not.(fooy on my part). I guess THIS is what God TRULY thinks of us, huh? Good reminder when you're fellin' down in the dumps. very nicely written, I shall bookmark it and keep it forever!


  • XpushXmeXagainX
    June 11, 2007

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    Wow. The imagery in this poem is beautiful. I like the line about hair blowing around her face. Nice write and good luck!


  • Broken Machine
    June 5, 2007
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    That was beautiful. I loved it!

  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 24, 2007

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    Beautiful. The Great I AM. He is worthy of all our praise. Thank you for writing this one. Thank you for standing in your faith to show others God's love. God bless you in all that you do.

    In Christ,

    Tabitha


  • Poplolly
    April 23, 2007
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    Awww very sweet. keep it up! this was one of your best.

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