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Forever and Always

"Padiddle!!"
"Aw, MAN...are you serious?" she mused.
"Heck yes! Pay up, Pal!"
He winks, allowing his eyes to momentarily
d.r..i...f....t from the road,
Meeting hers with that playful grin she can't resist.
"But Billy!...NO, I refuse to take off my bra.
Refuse...and that's final!"
Billy gets a mischievous look in his eyes
And asks her "Alex, do you trust me?"
"Forever and Always," she answers.

He pulls to the side of the road,
The tone in his voice playful as he says,
"To the rock quarry!"
And => CHARGES => from the car,
Alexa's heels dragging behind her
As she's thinking "NOW what?"

He runs around the car,
Opens the trunk and
B      U        C
   O         N         E
                             S
a basketball to her feet;
"One on one,
Man-on-man defense;
Anything goes..."
There goes that ~*mischevious*~ grin again...

"You in?"
The shirt comes off.
"How can I resist?"
She looks into his eyes intently, sensually...

 

Abruptly,
The ball is checked and play begins.

After a few intense minutes of play,

As well as a few *ahem*
Q?u?e?s?t?i?o?n?a?b?l?e plays,
He body blocks her,
His tightly toned chest pressed firmly against her,

Sweat dripping down his neck and shoulders

Mixing with hers,

Both breathing heavily...
He looks deeply into her eyes,
The air hangs thick with tension
Between their lips.
Begging to be broken,
He leans in, longing in his cerulean eyes.

For a moment, the air hangs
...T..H..I..C..K...
Unperforated;

Breath passes from one eager mouth to the other
As she forms the words,
"Do you Love me?"
Undaunted, he answers tenderly
"Forever and Always"

****E**
            **lec**
                     ***tricity*******
Flowing freely from fingertips to feet,
Sending sensuous shivers
Through two young Lovers.

Eyes remaining closed,
Whispers of his breath caress her neck.

"We are fit for each other..."
"Yes, to be together..."

"Forever and Always..."

Author notes

This was option three; the title reminded me of a story that my roomate had told me about her and her last boyfriend.  They would always say "Forever and Always."  So this is dedicated to them.  (They WILL be together again.  We all know it.  We're just waiting for them to realize it ;) lol) 

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  • im movin on 8137
    April 24, 2007

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    I like!

    This basically made me have butterflies. But anyhoo, I heart you! And I think I've discovered how to rhyme.


  • Sam-I-Am
    April 21, 2007

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    This is really impressive
    To get all the writing into this shape must have taken a lot of patience
    Very very good
    Midnight


    • I AM SpokenFor
      April 21, 2007
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      WHy thank you
      Actually, the shapes didn't really take that long; it just kind of happens sometimes. I didn't do it until a few months ago, but now that I have started, people really seem to like it.

      Thank you for your kind words


      • babygirltmple619
        April 24, 2007
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        Great, but the question is - do you like the shape poetry? I was confused when I saw it because you'd said you didn't like it or something. Anyway, good luck on finals! (Did you find anything of mine that I haven't realized I'm missing yet?)

        Love you much!!

        Lic

        • I AM SpokenFor
          April 25, 2007
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          *shrugs* I'm not completely opposed to the idea; I think it's fun once in awhile. I've just posted two in about a month or two. *shrugs* People evolve as writers/poets...YEESH *huge hugs*

          I love you a lot girlie

          *muah*
          ~*~Lea~*~

          • babygirltmple619
            April 27, 2007
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            I don't have a PROBLEM with it, I was just wondering if you liked it. It's not my style, but I've written a few like that. They are fun, but I was just wondering if you liked it because if you don't you shouldn't do it that way. No point in doing something you don't enjoy, know what I mean? YEESH to you too.

            I love you a lot a lot. I miss you. Come see me! :-P Good luck on the finals.

            Lic

            • I AM SpokenFor
              April 27, 2007
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              Read above comment I do enjoy writing in the shapes; it's fun!

              I love you muchly! I'm home for summer in a week!

              Thanks for the luck; I'mma need it

              ~*~K~*~


        • I AM SpokenFor
          April 25, 2007
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