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Look In His Eyes

Take in a breath, let it out slow
Listen to your heart, it knows where to go
Theres a fork in the road, but dont be shy
dont stop on the side, to watch him go by
Get your words right, your a poet you know
let them out carefully, let your emotion show
Theres that nagging feeling, in the back of your mind
what if, once you get there, a negative answer you find?
Well, then my friend, it is not meant to be
and you can let it go, and once again be free
there is no stronger poison, than a love held within
so dont look back, and let a new journey begin
look in his eyes, and tell him you care
hopefully happiness, is what you'll find there

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  • awesome

    this was another one of your poems that i loved so much it's powerful in truth and justice, how you should tell him you care even if it means getting hurt cuz if u dont then you will resent yourself for a long time thanx for sharing with us


  • snuggles72106
    April 21, 2007
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    this is really good! it made me smile i love poems about love. i loved the first line!


  • Paulies Cracker
    April 21, 2007

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    wow!!!! this was wonderful!!!! i really enjoyed reading this and wish you the best of luck. Thanks for entering!!!

  • Cheesey
    April 20, 2007

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    Wow!

    That would be an alsome poem even if it didn't rhyme! The rhyming part just made it all the better! That was fantastic. I think this poem should really win you the number one ranking! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
    Cheesey