I want to make you happy
And give you all my love
Show you that you're every thing
That a girl like me dreams of
I want to hold you in my arms
Each and every night
Let your name be the one I call
When I wake up in fright
I want to be there every time
You're happy or you're sad
Comfort you and wipe your tears
On the days you're feeling bad
I want to look into your eyes
And let you know I'm here
When you need someone to hold
You'll always know I'm near
I want to rub you when you're sore
And even when you're not
All these things I want to do
If we can have a shot
Author notes
I changed one word in the last line to fit this contest.
A contest entry
- How Do I Tell Him???? by Paulies Cracker.
415 points, ended April 28, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was brilliant so awesome and the way that the words flowed was amazing. and it had so much power and truth to it and i know how ya feel cuz i'm going through something similar now well i gtg bye thankx for sharing with us
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heyy i really like this poem! you wrote it very nicley and it all fit together very well <3
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Thanks!
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Great work here!
I love your honesty and sincerity
in this piece. Well done and best
of luck to you with it in the contest!
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Thank you!
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i really enjoyed reading this poem... it was wonderful!!! thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!!!
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