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Lost Soul-Haiku

LOST SOUL-HAIKU



Searching for my soul

I fall to my knees and pray

Seeking forgiveness

A contest entry

Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 22, 2007
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    "Searching for my soul" wow I Loooooooooooooove that line!!! its sooo strong! and is an excellent way to start the poem!!! the background was really good too!! thank you sooooooo much for entering!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!




    -Steve-


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    ok now this is so loving
    i think i like this one the best
    it is really a pretty write,
    very touching to the heart.

    manyblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce