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Save me

Darling
        You cross your heart
Say you’ll never ever leave
But I see the pain inside your eyes
Your heart is on your sleeve

Baby
I’ve loved more deeply
Than anyone could ever see
Devoted completely to only you
But you still see straight through me

With everything that we’ve been through
What’s gonna save me from loving you?
I want you to know
You’re why I’m alive
You’re the one thing that gives me will to survive

Lovely
You tried to leave once
But did you ever even consider
That when you’re heart finally stopped beating
Mine would follow suit and wither?

Honey
You wear me out
All I want is to see your smile
But you push me away and bruise my sore heart
I just wanted to be worth your while

And when you talk of the things you do
What’s gonna save me from hating you?
When your threat is to rip
My everything away
How can I think of a rational word to say?

Princess
If you are gone from me
My every breath would dissipate
My blood would stop inside my veins
My heart would literally break

Dearest
        Please stay with me
Right here with me till the day I die
Hold my hand for all eternity
And next to me in my grave lie

And if you’re gonna fall into a grave underground
What’s gonna save me from following you down?
I don’t want to lose you
I don’t want to die
Either way I don’t want to ever say goodbye

Please don’t make me ever have to say goodbye

Author notes

this is about my best friend. or, the girl that was.

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  • Darkened eyes
    May 24, 2007

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    This is really well written and shows powerful emotion, it's beautifully written with an excellennt rhythm, good luck.


  • ninja girl 418
    May 19, 2007
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    this is amazing. i absolutly loved it. fantstic.


  • animated lies
    April 27, 2007
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    Interesting concept. Thank you for entering my contest.

    -animated ♥