My soul does bleed
at the thought of losing you
the drops puddling in my stomach
drowning the desire inside
The love I hold for thee
Is impossible to release
yet allow you freedom
that I can see
I never want to hold you captive
Great potential I see in Y O U
No boundary to your freedom
Your born to fly true
I will never forget the space
those moments in time we shared
I can never forget that innocent face
The one that showed all the care
I leave the door open freely
I give you the chance to run
If you ever remember home
Come back, I will be here
You have the choices
The decisions of life ahead
Don't think that I will hold
For I am just the traveler
The guide at your side
Live your life as you see fit
Remember me at some instant
dont fly clumsily like a dove
Soar gracefully as an Eagle Up above
the perch you leave
the one called me
will always be here
Watching the skies with a stare
A contest entry
- a drop of tear by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended May 7, 2007, 16 entries
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Option 2.
Sorry I didn't get the chance to put what option i used in my author notes. For xxShadowEaterxx contest. -
Thank you very much
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the perch you leave
the one called me
will always be here
Watching the skies with a stare
Inded very heartfelt work...
you took us in the journey of heartfelt love that is the beauty of this work my friend and I must say thanks to you for sharing this curious work and moving entry as well...
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Thank you
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Great poem!
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