Oh how I feel
When some things are Real
Quickly it turns
To a burn that won't Heal
Scared for Life
So much Strife
Cuts you Deep
Like a Jagged Knife
Creeps in and out without a Doubt
Leave you Alone
Like a Dripping Water spout
The whirling wind
Took me for a spin
Tired and Weary
My Hair grows Thin
It really doesn't matter
Who wins
What's happening now
I knew it then...
The Deeper it gets
The Better it will be
Those were the things
I thought you saw in me
Time after time
I knew inside
The stories told
Were a pit full of lies
Nothing about this
I Despise
Just wished I had
Opened my Eyes
All the Laughter
All the Tears
All the time passed
I continued to let you hurt me...
For Years
Out of control
The only one who know
Looks down and Sits High
On a Thrown of GOLD
I'm out of my Mind
Too much time
Things have gone wrong
While I die inside
These old, Bones of Mine
Can't take up anymore Time
Caught up in this Mystery Life
As my Heart aches
With the knife...
Stuck in it Twice
Author notes
Partners In Crime Contest
Option #3
(Submit your most favourite poem out of your poetry)
It's funny how the Mind, is so powerful and we let it take total control of our Daily living. Holding onto Past Hurt and Pain, blocking the Pathway for Personal growth and gain.
Thanks,
Ephiphany
In a list
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Group Contest Enter If You Dare!! by Partners In Crime.
525 points, ended May 15, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can see why this is your favorite piece, it is good, the descriptions are so very real and relatable. The pain can be felt and read throughout. Nicely done, best wishes in the contest
Dove
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Impressive
This is a very impressive powerful write my friend.I could feel your emotions all the way here
Good luck to you in this contest
and in all you do
XXJeannette
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This is a very heartfelt write!! The words are pur flowing from your heart to mine!! There is rawness on this work..that is absolutely pleasing!! A very impressive write!! Thanks for sharing and good luck!
preets
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The ending gave a very powerful punch line with it. I think you did great and the best of luck to you in the contest.
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Well Done
Well done on this piece. I liked the way you wrote this. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Thank You
I appreciate your comments.
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waw....Wow...this piece is construed such that you get a natural flow...but full of sadness with possibly a hint of vengence...I love the twirl!!WELL DONE! Hey enter it in a contest or two...you might be surprised it si really good!~AC~
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Thank You
I really appreciate your comment on this.
Ephiphany
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Oh How I feel your pain...Reminds me of the old saying....the first time shame on you, the second time , shame on me..this was a profound write but rise up girlfriend for what does not kill us makes us stronger..God only gives us what he knows we can handle...Excaellent honest deep write!
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My friend
I thank you, and you are right...God does only give what he knows we can handle...Amen to his Mercy & Glory
Much luv,
Ephiphany
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So true..we need to just get over, lol..you have strong voice..
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Thank you again...I try to speak out every now and then.
E
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Sad but true
We cannot let go of our hurts and pains. We always remember the ones who hurt us but forget the good times we had. It is amazing with what clarity you can remember someone who did you wrong. But one can barely recall when someone lifted you up.
God Bless
Tammy
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