I feel DEDUCTED
crossed out
MINUS the equation
Of the whole
SQUARE ROOT that I am boxed in
If I don't belong to that
Then I don't make a PAIR
And I half expected Equality
In TIMES these TABLES will turn
I feel an ADDITION of PLUSES
In my life
It's all in the MATHS
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Hmm.. I did like the metaphor it was interesting. I loved the idea in this in what you did with the termonolgy. Great job... Thanks for the entry.
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Very captivating and logical. Nicely done.
My favorite lines:
feel an ADDITION of PLUSES
In my life
Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece. I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.
~VIRGOAN~
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Very creative and clever write you have come up with here
Well done and best of luck in this contest 
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Very creative and interesting piece! I enjoyed this!
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haha that is really cool! great write!
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