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Victory's Revelation

A day will come in glistened hopes,
for your hearts desire to be free.
Rainbows glow blessings forth,
for all the world to see

Beauties tide rolls swiftly,
dreams forever come true.
Life’s battles teach lessons,
to show the real strength in you.

Reflecting grace on eagles wings,
forward in freedoms song.
To keep your faith sturdy,
you must be ever so strong.

Don’t look in the natural,
for answers to be revealed.
Look deep into your heart,
where truth is forever sealed.

The front line moves onward,
lifting up their shields.
Responding to the battle,
praying for all to be healed.

Torment, Torture, Depression,
move out of the way.
Demons of Satanic forces,
today you’ve met your fate.

You have to flee from amongst us,
leaving my family free.
My house is not your playground,
you have no permission from me.

I have the power to rebuke you,
and tell you that you have to go.
I’ll build my faith with wisdom,
before you even know.

I will hit you blindsided,
to set the captives free.
You know where you can go,
for I have the Victory!




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  • Death of the Author
    April 30, 2007

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    Nicely flowing piece with good rhyme which creates a good image. I liked it, good luck and take care x


  • Free1977
    April 23, 2007

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    This is an amazing write

    this touched a place inside of me that is rarely ever touched i love this poem and wish you the very very best in this contest....always frances


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 23, 2007
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    wow really great poem with strng emotions...nice write


  • aliceramone
    April 20, 2007
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    get behind me Satan!.... a powerful piece here with great emotion and imagery...well done


  • Twins 4 me
    April 20, 2007
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    Awesome write! This is amazing! So much power and truth!

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