A perfect world, A perfect day,
A perfect feeling, too.
I used to write of fear and hate,
Until I talked to you.
I have not seen your lovely eyes,
Or traced around your face.
I have not ever held you tight,
Or been near you within this place.
Yet, every night, within my dreams,
I see you standing there.
I'll come to you, despite the fiends,
That tell me you have never cared.
A perfect word, To finally show,
That I'll be ever true.
I once was lost, and did not know,
My future was alongside you.
I have not felt your lips on mine,
Or brushed my hand against your arm.
I have not seen your brilliant smile,
Or been so close to feel alarmed.
Yet, I know exactly what to say,
To make you blush, and make you laugh.
And I can make you feel the way,
You make me feel, despite my past.
A perfect man, is what you are,
In every single way.
It doesn't matter, near, or far,
Because in my heart, you'll always stay.
Maybe we won't work at all,
Maybe we'll never meet.
Just know, I'll never let you fall,
I love you, you're my everything.
Author notes
Any critical comments would be nice.
A contest entry
- Love & Romance 101 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended April 24, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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PHANTASMAGORICAL
teach me your ways.
(i haven't been on allpoetry in ages) -
he sounds awesome. i would like to wish you the best of luck in this contest we both have entered. you have written this well. viyanna rosemarie
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such a poem of love and devotion!
Ty for entering my contest!
Lynda
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