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Dreams in Reality

My heart flutters as I think of you
Blood boils in my mind
Thoughts of us together
Holding outstretched hands
Looking in the eyes of the other
How is this so real, maybe its all a dream
If it be a dream
PLEASE PLEASE
Let me sleep until I die
This is a dream I wish to never end
This is a dream better than heaven
Someplace I have never seen,
But as far as my imagination
I have found heaven
In your eyes
In your touch
In your scent
This dream please let me keep
Make it last eternal
Keep me in the dark
Don't allow these eyes to awake
For my soul belongs here
My soul is held
Those delicate hands
Cradle my soul
Hold it close

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  • Twins 4 me
    April 20, 2007
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    What a beautiful piece! Good luck in the contest!


  • Shadow Seraphim
    April 20, 2007
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    Beautiful... Very loving, and full of emotion just what I am looking for in the poems in my contest.
    Thank you for entering it. and Good luck

    x-Midnight Vixen-x

    • Mr-Nice-Guy
      April 20, 2007

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      Thank you

      Thank you very much for your comment. I hope you contest draws alot of entries. I will be looking forward to reading more.


      • Shadow Seraphim
        April 20, 2007

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        You are welcome , and Thank you I hope so aswell, I may in a Few Days allow Pre-writes, well Good Luck again

        • Mr-Nice-Guy
          April 20, 2007
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          That s cool I may have another one to enter then, if that is allowed. I do have Some that hasn't been posted yet.

          Mr-Nice-Guy

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