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Restless

Lying on your bed.
Toughts running through my head.
Don't know what's going on.
Can't remember what went wrong.
Falling from above
Words like 'freedom' 'peace' and 'love'.
As if there's nothing more to life than that.

Lying on the floor.
Don't understand it anymore.
I can hear outside there's rain.
I wish I could leave this pain,
Leave this place behind.
There must be something out there to find.
There must be more to life than this.

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Just shpeeling really

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  • Freedom comes
    April 20, 2007
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    Superb poem my dear! I can feel the emotion in this. well done! xxx

  • Shadow Face
    April 20, 2007

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    Thought provoking

    Very well written. I know those thoughts and feelings. And there is more to life. Beauty still exist.