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Lie to Me

Tell me you love me

Though I know it's not true

Please lie to me

So I can spend one more night with you

 

Hold me tightly in your arms

Make me believe you care

Whisper so softly to me

Pretend that you'll always be there

 

Glide your fingertips down my arms

And send those shivers through me

Softly stroke my hair again

And show me what was supossed to be

 

Remember the good times that we've had

As if we still had them today

Kiss my lips oh so gently

Make me feel that we're still okay

Author notes

This is what I came up with this morning on the spur of the moment. Hope you like it! It's inspired by the quote about "Tell me you love me. I need to hear that beautiful lie".

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  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22, 2008

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    Oh those beautiful lies...they come too often don't they?! If only things could stay as they are in the beginning. Beautiful poem by the way. I loved it.


  • ScarletO gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    This is a very emotional poem with thoughts of wanting what is gone. It feels painful to read yet so well done.


    • DenyMyLove
      May 19, 2007
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      Thank you so much for commenting! And, yes, it is about what once was.


  • erininthesky
    May 18, 2007
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    "please lie to me
    so I can spend one more night with you"
    my favorite lines ♥
    keep it up!


    • DenyMyLove
      May 18, 2007
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      Thank you for your comment! They're my favorite lines too!


  • Blue fiery wolf
    April 21, 2007

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    Oh, this is a beautiful piece. Sometimes it helps to live in a dream. Too bad reality always breaks through.
    Very touching. Good luck in the contest!

    Tatjana
    -xXx-


  • starXcrossedxlover
    April 20, 2007

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    wow

    wow man--- same thing happened to me, that's like what i wanted to write, but i was too upset to do it, amazing job and i feel your pain and stuff.I'm so applauding this alot dude.


  • PoetBoy2008
    April 20, 2007

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    the bad thing is some men actually are like that they don't care and all they want is one night but you put it in a different prospective.


    • DenyMyLove
      April 20, 2007
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      Thanks! And yeah, men can be dogs!! Don't be like them!!!!
      ~DAWN~

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