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Playing the part

A hole in my head
I should be dead
Dreaming instead
Of a putrid past
I think it will last

My puppet cast

A cloudy vision

I've made my decision

Now for the mission

Free my friends

Make amends

Straighten the bends

Gut my heart

For a new start

I'll play my part

Dream a reality

Oh what a pity

Life in this city

On center stage

I feel no rage

For i am a cage

Trapped inside

Only to hide

Instinctive pride

In the end i fail

Part of a sad tale

Broken and frail

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  • NightRavensMuse
    May 3, 2007

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    Different

    I have never read a poem with this particular structure...I really liked it. May your muse be the wind under your wings and let your imagination soar. Keep the ink flowing.

    Tiff


  • Kiran silver member
    May 1, 2007
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    Fast paced and brilliantly written. This was excellent! Well done.


  • SheistheLorax
    April 21, 2007
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    Fucker... god, I'm glad you're back.