If we had one lifetime wish
one dream that could come true,
we'd pray to God so hard for
yesturday and you
The things we feel do deeply,
Are the hardest things to say,
But we your family, Love you,
In a very specal way
They say memories are golden
Maybe that is true,
But we never wanted memeories!
We only wanted you
A thousand times we've needed you
and a thousand times we've cried
If our loved could save you
You never would of died
Please tell me what you think
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Very heartfelt and sad. Lots of depth many can relate to. Great job on emotions!
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This is very sad..You did a great job conveying your feelings..I am moved. ~Pastel
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What a sad and beautiful write! Lots of emotion!
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hey thanx for the comment...
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