Banging your head against the bathroom stall
I lead you on your way to ultimate salvation
You are free; no longer restricted by virgin-bonds
Slick, sweat-ridden bodies and hair flying back
They called you tramp, harlot, and whore
I’ve never seen that face before
Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
I’ve never wanted more than to be with you, alone
Pumping, thrusting, panting away the night
The janitor running to get security feels so right
We finish in frenzied-gasps of climaxing-pleasure
Now we walk away, unpunished; hands linked forever
my first erotic poem.....kinda....tell me what's what!
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this is fuckin sickk hah i love it
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i love it haha sounds like alot of fun!
Something i have to try someday
It like that it is erotic and tough but at the same time quite sensual and full of feelings, not just random sex,
This is so good for your first one, i dont think i could ever express myself well enough to do this type, i think its a gift
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omg omg omg omg i love it hehehe makes me wna take my bf to the mall bathroom lol
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This is my third time reading this.
This poem is HxC!!!!
It truly is amazing...
This is the only poem that I have viewed three days in a row...
I'm proud of you, precious!!!
Deuces!
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K had to comment again...
This is serisously super hot...
I've never written about sex before...
IT's a great idea so dont be surprised if i post something...
But yeah, that's kinky and super sexy and it DOES do a good job turning a girl on...
So great job. Not only did you stimulate my mind, but my genitals as well!!! ;0 -
WOW. MY FANTASY!
If ever I could put my ultimate fantasy in words, this would be it....
AMAZING.
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They called you tramp, harlot, and whore
I’ve never seen that face before
Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
I’ve never wanted more than to be with you, alone
AHHH bby
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HOT!!!!!
Darling, you captivate me
xx
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wow.
This poem makes me wanna cream my jeans!!!!!
I love it so much I can't even pic a fav line.
this is simply delicious,kinky, fun
The thrill of sex in public places is soooooo worth it.
You're amazing bby.
This poem deff makes all the girlies hott
you got me going
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yummy
hot poem!
The janitor running to get security feels so right
We finish in frenzied-gasps of climaxing-pleasure
Now we walk away, unpunished; hands linked forever
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oOoOoOo b.b.baby...
"They called you tramp, harlot, and whore
I’ve never seen that face before
Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
I’ve never wanted more than to be with you, alone"
putting up our sex lives in poems;;
..darling you could make a girl blush..
mmmhhmmmm this is extreme sex-c
we shall have to try this sometime...
it's amazing
♥
-alexsis
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we are defffffinately gonna have to try this sometime!!!
lol
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great poem! i love the last 2 lines it really sums up the funn of doing some thing ur not supposed 2 and then getting away good job
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"Banging your head against the bathroom stall
I lead you on your way to ultimate salvation"
Fuck. Haha. All I Can See Is under age teenagers in the bathroom stall at the mobile Gas station fidgeting with flavored condoms and kit kat candy bars.
"They called you tramp, harlot, and whore
I’ve never seen that face before"
Loved the flow there.
Haha Mmmmyeah I don't know about the rest though. Don't Read much like that haha.
What ev. It's good♥
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yeah... I most defffff creamed myself. thanks now I have to go change
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lol, i gave you the full 10 pts cuz you said "i most defffff creamed myself"
lol that was great!
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I aim to please
mucho love too <333
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this was kickass well done
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Mmmmm Hunni-Bunni! All of was just like KERPOW!You used the word harlot! I love that word but I have'nt heard in forever.
Pumping, thrusting, panting away the night
The janitor running to get security feels so right
That's such a lovely example vivid imagery.
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll
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sex and candy
absolutley amazing for a short and wonderful little piece of sexalicious stuff...very nice. you make bathroom sex sound so hot..
your
pretty
little
whore
-xshotx
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oh jeez!
very thrilling
i love it its perfect!
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Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
I’ve never wanted more than to be with you, alone
Pumping, thrusting, panting away the night
The janitor running to get security feels so right
My Favorite Part!!!
Mmm.mmm.mmm BBDOLL
That is amazing!!!
Makes me ((hot))
Like only you know how to do
Aren't I lucky to have you as a master
♥Love♥ your mistress
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Slick, sweat-ridden bodies and hair flying back
They called you tramp, harlot, and whore
I’ve never seen that face before
Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
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thanks behbeh!
ur so sweet!
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good!
ok now teryl...this isnt you but it reminds me of mine and cody's fling. right after, adam walked in. wow! it was so intense. the fling-not the poem. good for your first shot tho, kid. i liked the janitor idea-kinky! -
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lol, yeah!
kinky's fun!
♥thanks jessie!!!
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Glitter-laced lips trail silken-kisses down my collarbone
mmmm.
love that.
so sexxxi.
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just like you, bby!
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