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Upset

A lethal knife promises red tears,
A platinum wedding ring, like the moon,
Truthful lover not possessive or fierce,
Your blind kiss and satin lips,
A scent wrapped rose I give to you,
Is it grief in your heart not love?
I am a faithful photo you will cling to as it will make you long for a reflection you like.

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  • WhenWillsCollide
    May 9, 2007
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    nice metaphors... I like metaphors


  • Lyre-Bird-
    April 21, 2007

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering my contest!!!!!!!!

    Thank you for your entry and I wish you the best of luck.......

    Tracey