'two hearts so very different,
a million miles apart,
come together in a rush,
when bodies meet,
how strange the feeling
when I am there with you,
for not one bird do I hear
sing,
no breeze to rustle leaves,
or snow to cool the air,
I am mesmerized by words
you form and gently give to me'
~
My words serve me poorly,
they can only say that
I thirst for you; when
I am as empty as a dry river bed.
My words can only say that I miss your touch
when I spend my days and dreams
thinking only of my lips pressed to yours.
And I feel the rush.
It rises up from within
from my deeper feelings.
It breathes into my body,
and I can think of nothing,
nothing at all, except you.
~
I watched you today,
as we passed by that same cafe,
walking summer sidewalks
and strolling winter parks,
with our breath that froze
the moment of a kiss...
saw the words fall and
your eyes shine,
I find I am lost in you,
inhale each word and savor
every night you are with me.
~
I saw you today
and it all came back to me.
The way you look at me,
the way your eyes adore.
There is a part of me that
is so grateful for you,
and a part of me that
becomes hungry for you.
It all came back to me today
as I saw you, looking at me.
~
Shaded silk in whispered love,
as we join together our skin,
never has such trembled pleasure
made me feel so whole;
safe, lying in arms I know
brings no fear,
you torch emotions within me,
I never understood,
never completely embraced
until we loved, so wholly.
~
And I want you, all of you.
Your touch excites me now
more than ever,
each time we love
feels fresh and new.
You give so completely
and I fall so deeply.
Stay with me now and
we will find happiness
entwined in
our embrace and paradise
at our fingertips.
~
Finally I can give you 'yes'
breathless answer you long to
hear,
for you gave me forever in
a sigh,
the world from your lips,
and I can gift no more to you
than my body and my spirit,
they both dwell within you now,
in lifetimes of 'I want you'
and never a goodbye~
~
A collaboration
Cannonsfire and Peteskid
Author notes
Amalgum
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest Collaboration Contest - Hosted by Nature Song & Slyder by Nature Song.
525 points, ended May 3, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A beautiful and radiant poem in quiet spirit of love. The distance never matters it's just great lovin in the makin. A lot of deep love glowing from inside. A heart with deep questions answered. You are heard, i miss you,can't think only but you. You watch the love grows the more u read it. Love these lines -
I saw you today
and it all came back to me.
The way you look at me,
the way your eyes adore.
for you gave me forever in a sigh,
from your lips, my body and my spirit,
they both dwell within you now,
in lifetimes of 'I want you'
It's beautiful! She is loved with the greatest expression of faith in love. The embrace makes it wholly and seal the fears n'est-ce pas.. As he and how he loves her will grow the love in beauty and likeness in being together forever. A triumphal poem of love! In love always with my tender half
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great work see the poet nounou dark piano you have some shared ideas
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This is a wonderful example of how collaboration can be so much more the the sum of two parts. The styles flow smoothly and compliment each other very well, an excellent entry.
Slyder -
With its unfolding beauty and depth of emotions, this piece is dreamy yet tenderly real...
"I find I am lost in you,
inhale each word and savor
every night you are with me"
Breathtaking! The two of you are a terrific team...Good luck in the contest.
Marianne
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Thank you Marianne, it is always a delight to write with PK, his words inspire a dreamlike state
Love, C
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Eloquently Beautiful Words
I must agree with Nature Song that verse just sent me over the hill, around the bend, and back again. I just adored this collab. well written, in beautiful excellence.........novy
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"My words serve me poorly,
they can only say that
I thirst for you; when
I am as empty as a dry river bed.
My words can only say that I miss your touch
when I spend my days and dreams
thinking only of my lips pressed to yours."
{whimpering} Ohhh, this is sooo not fair...I'm at work, dammit...
What a beautifully sensual penning, my Friends...You're both such talented & perceptive writers...Well done...Good luck in the contest...Methinks we're in troubbbble...
Wanda
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Thank you Chez
For the honor of writing with you again; each time has been a pleasure. You are a talented writer, thank you for bringing your unique insights and enthusiasm to this writing, so very nice ....PK -
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The pleasure and honor was all mine PK, if I bring the enthusiasm and insight it is only because your words inspire me to do so my friend. I thank you. Love, C
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'Shaded silk in whispered love,
as we join together our skin,
never has such trembled pleasure
made me feel so whole'
Amora~ Love is in the air~ Silk whispered love, together our skin, wonderful lines! Good luck in our contest. ~Sie
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