Sliding down hill, out of control.
‘Never again, will I feel whole.’
Thinking these thoughts, I try reaching out,
Ready to talk, but no ones about
My day began, worse than most others
Awoken by, my nightmare’s cold shudders
I wanted to talk, to let it all go
I thought I was ready, to let someone know
The more I tried, the more I held in
Terribly frightened, by the memories within
I messaged a friend, but what did I find?
She was worse off, how could I be so blind?
My selfish ways, have come out again
I must be a f*cking, horrible friend,
She’d had a bad night, but never made a sound
Then in the hospital, is where she was found
Things cluttered her mind, to much to bear
Feeling empty and lost, with extreme despair
When I found out, I blamed myself
For not being there, when my friend needed help
Fearful tears, filled my eyes
Scared for her life, her final demise
“If I haven’t of gone, out the night before
Perhaps I could have helped her, want to live one day more”
I wrote and wrote, of how useless I must be
To not have been there, when she really needed me
Lucky she recovered, survived this once more
But I wish I had of helped, prevent this before
When I’m at my worst, at my very extremes
No one can help me, or so it seems
Everyone else, has there own life
It’s not fair to them, to hear my strife
Who do you turn to, when everyone’s sad
When there all depressed, or really mad?
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well this one was about the other night. i dont no what else to say about it. if u dont understand whats its about just ask...
Please tell me what you think
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i love those last four lines
Everyone else, has there own life
It’s not fair to them, to hear my strife
Who do you turn to, when everyone’s sad
When there all depressed, or really mad?
That is so right you have really done a great job i love your work you have great talent sweetheart, i hope your doing ok you can talk to me if you need anything
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im glad you liked it, and im glad you like my writting...
thanks for bieng there.
take care, and i am here for you too if you ever need anything
love HB
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"My day began, worse than most others
Awoken by, my nightmare’s cold shudders
I wanted to talk, to let it all go
I thought I was ready, to let someone know"
Trust me, I relate to this.....
"Who do you turn to, when everyone’s sad
When there all depressed, or really mad?"
Go to someone you can count on..... someone who truely loves you for you.....
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Thanks for the comment
it means alot.
i am sorry u can relate to this but its good to no im not alone with these feelings n thoughts etc...
take care
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Whoa.
This is amazing sis! The ending really hit me hard. I can completely and totally relate to this poem, cause I've been there. Your skills at writing amaze me. Thanks for sharing this, it really hit me hard.
Well done!
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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thanks for your comment sis!!!!!
this was a strong poem for me too, and im soryr u can relate actually...
thanks heaps ur encouragement means alot to me
love you heaps
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this is another excellent piece by you. i love your poetry. it has so much power behind it. it comes from the deepest crevices of your heart. i can relate to this one. i have been in the same situation. i quite like the wording and flow and the layout as well. great work. keep it real and take care of yourself.
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You already know how I feel sweetie. And you know that no matter what's going on with me, that I'm here for you. I love you lots, you've been such a wonderful friend to me through all your stuff, I don't know what I would do without you. I'm here anytime chickie, remember that. This is a really great piece of writing, with what you've expressed and the rhyme. Your writing just keeps getting better It was worth waiting for this piece hun. Keep on hanging in there babe xoxox
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thank you alot! your comment means heaps to me!
your an amazing friend too, and you have helped me through alot, but i fear that there is alot more to get through before things will b fine.
thanks again
much love sweeite
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I hope all is ok now. It is sad that you had no one to turn to, but please don't feel to blame for your friend. You weren't to know. I hope that the both of you are ok 
xxxxx Love you lots.
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its all good now this was about a week ago i think. she is good now too...
thanks alot for your comment and applause
luve you
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You're most welcome, and I'm glad all is ok. I luv u 2 xxxxx
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