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synonymous

doorways open wide

the smile that comes from inside

wind gusts throwing wild 

A contest entry

how did it make you feel?

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 29, 2007
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    wow that was good!! "how did it make you feel?" well it made me feel pretty good! I really liked this piece!!! my favorite part of the piece was the way you ended it "wind gusts throwing wild" it was sooo good!! thank you sooo much for entering!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!




    -Steve-