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dance in motion

Missing image
 

I see face

in silver swirl,

as moon rides wing,

to sliver Venus

 

in darkest night

and still,

of burrowed beast

 

where Heaven's breast

feeds sigh,

in symphonies strung long

 

and all is one in dust of stars

 

 

sphere of sun

spins golden lace

upon a dawning dream

 

to wake as green reply

in misted mornings

chance of fate,

where fades Orion's

belt

to black relief,

 

bequeathed,

upon a gentle soul

as tide does lick

upon a silken shore

 

in grains of white

to see my parchment,

placed upon a fresher page

 

and word is stroke

to brush surrender

 

in tender hush of lover's kiss

 

where warm is parted breath,

as river's merge

to join in ocean

 

and heart's desire

lies

in deeper canvas craved,

 

of dance in motion

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  • poet2angels gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    beautiful!

    Such tender words of a poet:

    "sphere of sun

    spins golden lace

    upon a dawning dream"

    I LOVE THAT LINE!!
    Beautiful!

    Lynda


  • kaibab silver member
    April 20, 2007

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    Such wonderful artistic impression of color swirl in life's creation...just so beautiful poet friend