Out on the road
Under the Fog
Deep in the Dark
Deep in the woods
There are men returning from war
Trying to find some peace of mind
There are men sleeping in graves
Trying to wake from the Quicksand dreams
Living in this dream
Sitting in this corner
Speak to me so the world won’t crumble
Open the door
Let the Light shine in
The moon wont fall
All of your Life memories
Forget it all
I know you will never return to this place
Gone today without seeing
There is no comfort in Blindness
No more speaking
These words can not ease the pain
So use to losing
Left alone this wound is always bleeding
Seems I am always Crying
Once I die
The sun will be smaller
Won’t be able to cover up
How the darkness fell unto me
Prisoner of my own walking
I know you will never return to this place
Make Clear the Echoes of Life
Counting Hours
Waiting to Die
Searching for the answers to these Lies
Might be waiting for so long
Will I still be waiting for someone?
Or will they be staring directly at me
What’s beyond what our eyes can see
Please tell me what you think
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opps
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Wow this is pretty deep and painful. I love the line 'There is no comfort in blindness', it really jumped out at me because I used to try and find comfort in substances and it worked at the time but then you have to come down to a stark and horrible hell. Temporary comfort is an illusion so it's such a true line. This is quite incredible really because I just read it again and my imagination could go off in so many different directions with it. It's multi-layered and has an air of mystery as you seem to leave it up to the reader as to where to take it and how to interpret it.
Love, light & peace
Georgia
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Great
This reminds me of a song by Opeth, Death Whispered A Lullaby. It's very deep and has a wonderful tone. You represent acceptance to the darker side of life; it's full of very dark sentiments on how intimidated we are by the thought of our own seemingly meaningless mortality. You captured very well a certain suffering, not quite pity, that is heartfelt and realized...then wrapped it up in acceptance, cause that is all we can do in the end. There is: 'what if' an then there is 'What Is'. What if is only productive if applied to the latter. I was struck by this magnificent expression. -Rai
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Opeth I know the song
I am not sure but I could have been listening to Opeth prior to writting this. Someone else mantioned it. Thanks for the comment
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