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[ forgotten ]

--forgotten in the mind {eyes} of god
he was swallowing back "i love you"s
(with a mouth on her wrists to whisper skinsecrets)
pinning her confessions
down with her shoulderblades.

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shortshortshort. maybe i'll end up adding to it. maybe nottt.

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  • sweetpearl
    April 24, 2007

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    Nah, adding to pieces usually fucks them up I swear. Well, you're talented you could probably pull it off. Fuck, what do I know? Not much I tell ya. Not much. I really like the opening line.


  • makeout kid
    April 20, 2007
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    short && lovely.
    that is all.

    beautiful.