The flower
blooms for a season
it withers away,
then rebirthed anew,
shining,
and waiting
for the soft delicate rain
Author notes
Background Thanks to Maatkara
In a list
A contest entry
- Ten lines or less by Harrisham Minhas.
420 points, ended April 21, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a great beautiufl poem
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Nice imagery here. It is a wonder how life recycles itself in nature. Maybe it is evidence that humans do the same. Excellent and thought-provoking work here poet. The best to you in the challenge and life.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Beautiful...
I love how the simplicity in this poem holds do much meaning.
Very nice!
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You know...
this kind of reminds me of my spirit right now...
I went through a season of withering...but the blooming is starting again
I love your writing friend...it's always so powerful... always leaving me applying it to my life somehow... kind of like chicken soup for the soul
xoxo
heidi
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A tender write. Very nice.
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
Harrisham Minhas
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Wonderous descriptions of the annual metamophorus of the flowers.
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Very nice poem so succint in a modicum of words!! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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This is a fabulous piece my friend. I love the thought that must have gone into it. You leave the reader something to ponder over.
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so butiful sis... short sweet n powerful ... good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx
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I love the way you seem to have an amazing talent to write such powerful poems in such few words.... another brilliant piece. Good luck in the contest.
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A lovely poem, my dear. It reads softly, simply and carries a message of hope. Or it can be read much more deeply, inner feelings of great depth hidden within its lines.
When I look at this, read it as coming from you, I can see your progress with life and your creativity.
You've written beautiful piece and I wish you the best in the contest
Love and
Granna
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I feel like I sat on a fluffy white cloud reading this, so delicate and softly written, Amazing job Sis! KEep the pen flowing!
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awwww this is so soft and smoothly written
I loved it
and the background is fantastic too
Wish you good luck in this contest
XXJeannette
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Ooh, this has a soft - and in some kind of strange way also a sexual and sensual feeling
or did you do that on purpose 
lol 
Very well written hunny!
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simple short but lovely and descriptive
good luck hun
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Lovely, simple and rather Zen
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