Perfect dreamer
Unstable eyes
Moving slowly towards d.e.s.p.i.s.e
Phones left ringing
Hearts remain throbbing
Sanity.in.a.silver.bag.
A blind gaze at sobbing cries.
A subtle moment
Lost behind
A distant face so falsely kind
Touch my veins
Chemical c.a.r.e.s.s
sanity.in.a.silver.bag.
Beyond those rusty doors
I lay awake
And cry without reason
From my blue glazed eyes
The dirty torn sheets
I hide beneath
Take me to another time
Where I fall into a restless s.l.e.e.p
A subtle moment
Lost behind
A distant face so falsely kind
Touch my veins
Chemical c.a.r.e.s.s
sanity.in.a.silver.bag.
Author notes
I suffer from manic depression, I was homeless for 5 months and during that time I became a heroin addict.
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Comments
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Wow. I liked the repition of
"Touch my veins
Chemical c.a.r.e.s.s"
This was amazing. Well written.
And im sorry to hear about your past
your amazing to be able to write about it.
thankyou for entering
love lithium
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brilliantly written...
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wow sweetie..
just wow..
i know the feeling of not being able (or think you cant) suvive without heroine.. && this has touched me..
well done
thanks for entering and good luck -
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Thanks my dear
I appreciate your words. Heroin is a difficult drug to get off. I thank your understanding.
xXxPurexXx
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this is really good! well written and great imagery.
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Thankyou.
xXxPurexXx
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