As I walk in the streets of memory,
And my mind, lost in fond remembrance
Is reminded of the allegory
Of the first time I had seen you dance.
My heart wails on, in slush nostalgia
I long for the joy of the long lost times,
Like a thirsty Muse for ambrosia
I moan,for all gets lost in sea of time
And with them die so many thoughts and rhymes
So many songs,friends,passions and desires
Uncountable words, some heaven-lit,some dire.
Like South flying birds they all by me pass
Beyond Horizon they fly and burn in fire
To never return back,to adorn the grass
A contest entry
- Keep my attention by writing something great!!! by Luciferschild.
400 points, ended May 22, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Brilliant
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i liked the offbeat almost rhymes, the lines were full of meaning and it definitely acheived the objective of keeping my attention, thank you for entering
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beautifully written
memories are just as important as the reality of today,as we live to make them survive all the whethered thoughts of doubt, good job..good luck in the contest!MM
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THANK YOU
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