We're souls drifting apart
Our passion sought to perish.
I find it hard to remember
The last time I trembled at the touch of your lips.
The last time a smile crossed my face
As you took me into your unloving arms.
No more happy tears, only sad.
No more pleasant years, only bad.
We're souls drifting apart
And we're no longer in love.
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It happens.
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yeah it does happen doesn't it. Love can last a lifetime if you are really lucky... but why one and not another love. Hummm... great question. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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beautiful. this poem gives such a sad image, reinforcing the title wonderfully. i like the repetition of 'the last time' and 'no more' as well as the title.
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Thank you
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that first line, and its repetition later, is very haunting, such a sad image. some beautiful lines in this. brilliant write, thanks for sharing.
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Thanks.
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