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We live today

Here we are looking back, how things have changed,
Mere words can not express, the feelings i've felt,
Nor the troubles we've all been through
Do we have regrets? of what we once had?
Times have changed this is now
No distant thoughts of what could have been
We're living today, no use in looking back at yesterday
While we wait for tomorrow, no-one can take that away from us
The memories the dreams, shall still remain
New friends and old still stand strong
Never to be forgotten as a torn piece of paper
Floating by on the wind, this is now,
We live today...

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  • Sniffles
    April 20, 2007
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    i know lol was just erm i dunno >_< writters block etc trying to get over it, i'll return to it and see if i can make it better ^_^ and thankyou


  • The Void
    April 20, 2007

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    this was a nice poem but I know you can do much better, this poem feels like you ruch to write it down with out sorting out you emtions first. still it wasn't bad. please return the favor