it's too bright to bud
- right now anyway
pristine & too blameless
unready for flossy feats
but in time you'll
- kiss your share of sun
© Menstruosity Productions
A contest entry
- suddenly sun by jantastic.
600 points, ended April 26, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever.
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nice
I love the garden imagery!
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I love the way you captured that surer than sure attitude ,the knowingness of belief.. There's nothing like an optimist to remind a cynic .. every thing has a crack ..
congratulations.. !
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Believe me, it was a peak I am trying to climb back up to : )
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"you'll kiss your share of sun" ... what a delightful and profound line this is. A super piece. Congrats on the trophy!
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I really like this.
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Thank you! This is so encouraging <3
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Excellent.
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