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The Bells Sound Midnight

The bells sound midnight
Calling on my radio
Damn, I need to sleep.

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  • Restless Brook
    April 21, 2007

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    Wow! This is quite excellent. Short, and definitely sweet. The mood captured in those three lines is perfect.


  • Lj-
    April 20, 2007
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    I really like this. Cool thoughts. Easy to relate to.

    Best of luck.


  • HaleyMary
    April 20, 2007

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    Good write. It does suck not being able to sleep through a night. Good luck with getting more sleep and good luck in the contest.


  • polly filla
    April 20, 2007
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    neat senryu

    yeah, there's nothing wore than not being able to get to sleep


  • She burns
    April 20, 2007

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    So true and sweet, time to rest and go to the bed, dreaming again with the stars

  • InBetweenThoughts
    April 20, 2007

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    I am hearing those bells, though it is 5am it sounds the same Sleep is a definite thing! Good luck in the contest Have a great day, Ken IBT and Goodnight!

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