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Giving inside

Following you as you go
I don't know how to breathe anymore
My heart has always been alone and cursed
That's why I'm needing you
Wanting you so much to be with me
I dream of your love everyday
I'm aching for you
I'm dying for you to feel me
I just want to hold you
I just want to make this pain go away

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  • theghostofher
    April 20, 2007
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    great

    i love the whole poem its all so great. the pian of longing and the fellings of hurt.


  • Klayer
    April 20, 2007

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    I love that second line so mutch. Breathing is sustch a simple thing yet they way you have used it showes alot of pain and needing.