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Cold Wind

cold wind from the north
blows leaves from the trees
geese fly south

In a list

A contest entry

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 20, 2007
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    excellent write!!! a beautifully written haiku!!! I really enjoyed reading this!!! oh and in the first line is "ihe " a typing mistake? just thought you might want to fix that. anyway thank you sooo much for entering!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!




    -Steve-

  • pozo
    April 20, 2007
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    Cool write Good luck in the contest. Is 'ihe' a typo?
    Pozo