What is this hell they call life?
Ease your pain with a slash of a knife
And think "why am I the one to be like this"?
Why cant I be happy and full of bliss?
To hear nothing but "you cant" screaming at you
But There is nothing you cant do
Just think there is something more
Something worth living for
You might not know what it might be
But just hold on and wait and see
So put down the knife and stop the tears
And dont think of any fears
Just hold your head high
And let those eyes dry
Author notes
It is basically saying dont give in something good will happen.But you dont kno when it will happen.But it will.
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I really like this poem. the way it flowed and the feeling was awesome. Keep up the good work

