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Hopeless Romantic

HOPELESS ROMANTIC



Hopeless romantic

Surrender your love to me

Let me ease your heart
















































A contest entry

Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 21, 2007
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    Damn! this haiku is sooooooooo good!!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece!!! it was soooo beautifully written! I Loved it! my favorite line of the piece was "Surrender your love to me" it was sooo strong!! thank you sooo much for entering! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!





    -Steve-


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    Oh wow! You are really good
    at these!!
    You speak volumes with so
    few words! And oh the words!
    Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie