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Holding on for Life

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HOLDING ON FOR LIFE



Fighting for a breath

Waiting for a miracle

Holding on for life















































A contest entry

Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 21, 2007
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    awwwww! that was soooooooooooooo good!!!! it was kind of sad too but a beautifully written haiku!!! my favorite line of the piece was the way you ended it "Holding on for life" it was soooo strong!! thank you soooo much for entering! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!






    -Steve-


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    Oh gosh! The picture touches the heart,
    and your write drives the point deep!
    Awesome job.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie