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One Hot Haiku

Sultry summer storm

Hot erotic explosions

Rushing rain of lust

A contest entry

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 21, 2007

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    hmm
    interesting write
    I wonder what ytou were thinking about when you wrote this
    short, simple
    and very good
    you;ve described so much in three small lines
    good luck in that contest
    Keep it up

    ~Miraculous~


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    "One Hot Haiku" thats a really really good title! this haiku is really good! I had a great time reading this piece!!!! thank you soooo much for entering!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!




    -Steve-


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    A few lines packing a powerful punch! Good job on this and...good luck in this contest! I love contest challenges myself however, Haiku's are not among my forte! Good work ~Tia


  • Lactar Wolfgang
    April 19, 2007

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    i see a few commen things but that is all. You wrote a nice poem here, I like it good luck in the contest. I know I am not going to win but who knows right ....


    • MissAnonymous
      April 19, 2007
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      yea you might win second HA just kidding i couldn't help myself in saying that. good luck in the contest!

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