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Where Angels Frolic and Play

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WHERE ANGELS FROLIC AND PLAY



Fly away with me

Where angels frolic and play

In Heaven above

A contest entry

Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!

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  • workingharleylady
    April 25, 2007

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    very nice

    Hi Jeremy, This is my favorite type of poem, saying sooooo much in so few words. Great job. Touche'. Also a huge thank you from the bottom of my heart for your excellent comments on my poem. Fondly, Chrissy


  • getsbetter
    April 21, 2007

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    It gives your reader a sense of warmth to be included in your happiness. Very nice and kind write with your words brother. I enjoyed it very much...GETS

  • InBetweenThoughts
    April 20, 2007

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    Good afternoon Jeremy A beautiful write! In so few words you have enhanced the already beautiful opicture above. Great form true to Haiku...Good luck in the contest Ken IBT


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 20, 2007
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    wow! just WOW! this piece is soooooooooo beautifully written! I Loved it!!! the picture you chose with this piece went with it sooo well!! thank you sooooooooo much for entering!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!



    -Steve-


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 20, 2007
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    B E A U T I F U L
    Don't know what else I can say.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    Jeannie

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