Current Misery
married to the Flannel Queen
Damn the cotton ball
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest!! by KnightOfTheRose.
325 points, ended April 29, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I think its a good strong poem. I really liked all of the poem.
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wow! that was soooo strong! an excellent haiku! great job! my favorite line was the way you ended it "Damn the cotton ball" it was soo strong! thank you soooo much for entering!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
-Steve-
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cotton ball hum
what about the curlers
Roses to you and hugs
Teresa
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Smiling here...
As one who loves cotton and warm nighties, I get your poem plenty well. 
Love takes many forms and let us count the ways. 
Haiku takes talent and smarts and you have both! 
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I'll just say ouch and send
s & 
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Storm -
Damn the cotton ball? Care to explain? Why can't you leave her?
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