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[dancing.in.the.rain]

The rains pouring now
As you pull me into it
Into your arms
Im already soaked

You give me a kiss
Warming my heart
And you take my hands
And twirl me around

[dancing.in.the.rain]

No one ever does this
Only in the movies
But movies show what we want
And it is so much fun

You spin me more and more
Then you pull me back to you
You kiss me once, and hold me close
As we try and find warmth

[dancing.in.the.rain]

Author notes

I really did do this. With my new boyfriend. We danced in the rain, we kissed in the rain...it was fun

i guess its true, dance like no ones watching

Because its so.much.fun

Wow I

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  • ConvenientExcuses
    April 20, 2007
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    awww that's so cute. the rain is perfect for that situation. great poem! keep it up! =]


  • Mythtress
    April 19, 2007
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    Lucky girl to have danced in the rain... I can remember doing that once and it was fun. I am reminded of another song..."I'm singing in the rain, just singing in the rain..." But I am a sap for old musicals and that one is one of my favorites.

    Enjoyed this glimpse into your life. Wonderfully written. Write on, poet.