Never was there a greater weakness
A problem worth having,
The reason for my evolving meekness
You're the stars to my midnight
Never did I love the sky more,
I see it shine with such wonderful light
You give me a reason to smile
When all I wanna do is cry
Making me laugh hardly takes a while
With your hand in mine
I can fly,
Like the sun you make me shine
With every moment I love you more
With every word I find it's you I adore
Never did I know a love like this before
A contest entry
- So this is love by Angierie.
575 points, ended May 22, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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adorable!!!!! and brilliant!
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Wow this is absolutely beautiful, and describes the image wonderfully well. What a wonderful, love-forged scribe.
All the best, Zach -
I enjoyed this write. Thank you for posting it. God bless you always in all that you do. You are forever in my prayers. Have a blessed day.
In Christ Jesus,
Tabitha Robin
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This is beautiful and so innocent. The background is a perfect match, and the entire thing was very...sweet.
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You described the two in the picture without even trying!!
Lovely job and thanks so much for the entry!!
"You give me a reason to smile
When all I wanna do is cry
Making me laugh hardly takes a while"
----I know how this feels.. and I love it!!!
Angie
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