hurts ------ being there
release ------ so nice
feels bad ------ don’t care
freedom ------ will suffice
the pain ------ not fair
now open ------ we entice
say bye ----- can’t dare
in love ----- so nice
Author notes
Options 1 & 2 (Really, not an option at all, because life chooses these options for us, eh?)
Love is found and love is lost
Love's price can be high cost
If we find it in due time
Then it can be most sublime
But if we never get the chance
Then life is just a lonely dance
poet
A contest entry
- Lost Love, Found Love Show me Both!! by Shadow Seraphim.
649 points, ended April 29, 2007, 21 entries
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i like this...its different, very neat
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This is Nice but you didn't follow the Last Rule, but its okie just be so kind as to fix it. I see you use both options , Its interesting, and Something New, I like it, It really gets one mind to think. Thanks for Entering it, Good work.
x-Midnight Vixen-x -
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Sorry
Thank you for the reminder.
Sometimes I'm drifting off and away
To some place where my heart can play
The malady I seem to suffer from
Is malaise, for love has never come
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Simply put, yet it creates some very interesting and thought provoking visuals...though short and to the point, those few words have so much meaning behind them...
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