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A change[Your deadly]

Our stupid [p.i.n.k.y.p.r.o.m.i.s.e.s],
Suddenly have become nothing.
&&& you don't really care that you've,
Shattered my everything.

My world lays in peices,
[You s|h|a|t|t|e|r|e|d it so much]
It didn't stand a chance against,
Your l.e.t.h.a.l touch.

Broke down my barriers,
      &&& smashed through my walls
Your b.r.i.l.l.i.a.n.t ||blue|| e||y||e||s watched,
Pathetic me fall.

Handed me the needle,
&&& pushed it deep in my skin.
        [Took a.d.v.a.n.t.a.g.e.s]
&&& fucked me over deep within.

&&& you always 'effin knew it,
You're words are something d||e||a||d||l||y,
Just take a look at what ended up,
Happening
        To
            ME.

15-04-07
♥Burrdifly

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Um. It's a TBC[To Be Continued]
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  • freespirit51 gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    Very interesting piece my young friend. It is filled with many deep emotions and feelings. The one strong emotion I feel from this piece is Confusion. I hope all works out for you. Great work.


  • Luv A Surfa Gurl
    April 23, 2007
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    yay 4 pinky promises!!!

    geeez my darling burrdifly uve amazd me agen ♥


  • autumns rising
    April 22, 2007
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    dun dun dun.... thats just scandalous i cant wait. This was reallly really amazing. I loved the very end but my fav was.
    "Our stupid [p.i.n.k.y.p.r.o.m.i.s.e.s],
    Suddenly have become nothing."
    ahh i remember pinky promises
    .....swell times.....
    Love ya
    -DAni