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The Road of Yesterdays

Yesterdays,

sprawling out behind me -

a never ending road.

 

And me,

standing with my back to them

even though

they're so much easier to see than

the

tomorrows.

 

I want to leap,

leap back

into yesterday

and into being

that little girl

I used to be.

 

And I am scared,

but I have to go

quietly

into tomorrow,

finding out who

the new me

will

be.

 

With my eyes ahead,

I just hope I'll

never

lose sight

of all my yesterdays.

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Inspired by talking to my grandma about becoming an "adult". Please comment.

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  • animated lies
    April 19, 2007

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    Very unique freeform. I enjoyed how you played your words with time (past & present.) Clever, thanks for entering my contest