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I loved You

The happiness is gone
It washed away with my feelings
My feelings for you that is

I loved you

But you ignored it
You let her stand in the way
I would have been there for you

I loved you

Now your leaving
And I'm staying here
Waiting until I find the "perfect" guy

I loved you

I knew you were for me
I suppose you did not see
I was right in front of you the whole time

I loved you

She stole you away
She was supposed to be my "friend"
More like being tortured by her

I loved you

I was broken when you just stood there
Just staring at me, like I was crazy
For what I said was from my heart

I loved you

Now the question is Do I still?
I'm not sure now that your almost gone
After this last month, you'll have left for college

I loved you

Do I still?
Will I ever get over you?
Do you love me?

I loved you

I wish I could answer these questions
But only you can truely answer them for me
Even though I know I should be

I loved you

Truely I did, can't you tell by the way I look at you?
I just can't help but blush or look away
When I see you looking at me, I wonder

I loved you

Does he love me too?
Could he really be mine?
Should I give up?

I loved you

If I still do I don't think I'll ever know for sure
He will move on and marry
I must move on, but my heart and mind don't agree with each other!

I loved you














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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 19, 2007
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    Thanks hun! Yea it is. Glad you read it though.


  • Emo Cowboy14
    April 19, 2007
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    awwww

    aww that was realy good and heart breaking. loved it

  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 19, 2007
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    LOL! I don't think I could do that. Thanks for the kind words though. I think either writing potry about him and all is helping me get over him OR it could be making me want him more, lol

    Mem


  • Jeneralix
    April 19, 2007

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    Sad...Mem, this is a great poem. Very sweet and kinda bitter. I love it! I think you should show him the poem and seriously tell him how you feel.
    Best wishes,
    Jenerali