Hello, my friend, Ode to you!
How are you at this day's new?
So glad, to see you here about.
Happy to hear your spirit shout.
Hope these words, find you true.
I'll always be, Friend for you.
Author notes
Hello friend hope you enjoy this poem and thank you for allowing me to write for you...best wishes always Frances
A contest entry
- AnYtHiNg by Samantha-..
550 points, ended May 5, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short and sweet, that's what I like about it. You have a very sincere write here! Nothing I see is wrong with it, and you have such a nice-flowing rhyme as well. You see, a poem doesn't have to be super long to say a message. Take a look at yours. It's somewhat short, but the message is really strong.
"I'll always be, Friend for you."
That's so nice and heartfelt. Loved it and good luck in the contest!!! I'm sure that friend appreciates the friendship!
~Poetrydove~ -
this was really cute. happy and cheery stuff!
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