It was a soul that I'd sought
And a soul that sought me
We were one
Never to be
Our lives were too busy
But we were so free
Talking of things
That we'd never see
All these women around
But he only saw me
That's when I knew
That I truly loved thee
Time flew by quickly
Before it begun
A traveling man
Looking for no-one
Who would of thought
That he would meet someone
This girl in the sun
She too on the run
Also looking for no-one
Inside me a shiver
Knowing again
He'll walk in my door
Where in my heart he remained
Another moment alone
Another hug in the rain
Another memory in time
How things don't change
So I fled from his arms
Taking his pain
Never to see him
My wish to explain
We were two souls
Whose thoughts were the same
Lions alone
But together were tame
We talked and we laughed
No need to explain
A feeling of warmth
Our fate to remain
That's why I know
I'll see him again
If not in body
In soul all the same
Author notes
I have chose option 1
A contest entry
- Lost Love, Found Love Show me Both!! by Ravenic Seraphim.
649 points, ended April 29, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful words, Tears come to my eyes when I read this, I feel this way sometimes about the man I love,
The lines the really have touched me are:
"Where in my heart he remained
Another moment alone
Another hug in the rain
Another memory in time"
Thank you so muck for entering it, and Good Luck
x-Midnight Vixen-x -
Beautiful !
This is really good. It shows sadness, happiness and hope. Excellent write and best of luck in the contest
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Very fun read
I love the way you ended this one.
We were two souls
Whose thoughts were the same
Lions alone
But together were tame
We talked and we laughed
No need to explain
A feeling of warmth
Our fate to remain
That's why I know
I'll see him again
If not in body
In soul all the same
with hope of finding each other again. I like that.
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