Why did you ever go out with her?
She's stupid and a prep
So blonde and kinda fat too.
No sense of style
Or even any kind of shame.
You had to have been crazy
To even agree to date her.
She's not even close
To being the right one.
No sirree, not at all.
I guess it kinda makes sense
Seeing as you are truly blonde
And knowing the reputations
That makes somethings go
Right past your head.
You seriously didn't realize
That I was there waiting
For you to notice I was there.
Or you noticed and ignored
Which kinda hurts.
Well I just wanted to tell you
Your ex-girlfriend was a slut.
Not even joking, my dear friend.
I'm surprised you didn't notice,
But I'm just spelling it out.
Author notes
Option #6- 4. Girlfriend by Avril Lavigne
ROFL....this is kinda true about one of the guys at my school.
hope this works and just as a note, i love avril.
Dear Katie, =)
Tacos are a lot of fun to eat and big ones are the best!!
<3 Jenerali
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kewlness
LMAO! This was good. You followed the song really good. I am pretty much obsessed with that song right now. Great flow and rhythm. However, I am giving you 24 hours to put in the appropriate things in the author's comment box from rule six. Other than that great job!!! -
well tis is very interesting, good
"I guess it kinda makes sense
Seeing as you are truly blonde
And knowing the reputations
That makes somethings go
Right past your head."
- such a slap in the face!!!
good poem!
good luck in contest!
-dax -
Nice poem. I can totally relate...excpet she's a brunette. And he's my ex. But whatever. Good job, good luck in the contest!!!
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LOL
Ha ha! HEY HEY YOU YOU, i do like your poem! yeah, reminds me of avril! I LUV HER TOO! a cute little write, very charming and amusing.. though it doesnt rhyme, its grasps you all the same.. very nicely written.. "i m surprised u didnt notice"...lmao..and um, this is one of the 'best damn things' i have read... Thanx a lot for entering, Best of luck in this contest...Lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi -
Hey Hey You You!
I love it, I love Avril and your random was random, lol. I love that this was inspired by the song that is currently the story of my life! lol
It was very well written and by the end I was only slightly disappointed....and that was cuz it ended.
I think it was perfectly written and it definately touched close to home with me.
Loved your write!!!
~Katie -
hmm...wonder who you could be talking about. lol.
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haha, loved this. i know this one. some of the people who go out with other people...idk, lol!
But I'm just spelling it out.
loved those lines, cause its kinda pathetic how we have to spell things out for guys sometimes. lol.
great job baby
[[Chaos]] -
Haha! Excellent! The thing is, nothing changes: I'm in my forties and I still feel EXACTLY the same way sometimes!
What is it with the blonde thing? Well written. "Any kind of shame" is wonderful! Good luck in the contest.
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HEY!!! I lik-ie!!! I dont see why some girls have to be such sluts... ^_^... stupid and sad! well, sweet poem. and I love Avril too!!! ^-^YAY!!!!
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hahahaa! grrreat poem!!!
definately something avril mite write.. haah..
love it!! thanks for entering!!!
and it's always nice to find a fellow avril lover!
great writing
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lol I laughed my ex is a blonde lol. That makes it even better best of luck sis.
Love Jordan Lee -
haha i luv the song girlfriend...and i am too a really big fan of avril love the poem
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I so agree! It is exactly like the poems I have been doing lately. Great write!
*Gives you 3 applase*
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