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Pneumatic Romance

On the construction site we met
I saw you through the dusk
strong and powerful,
like the pneumatic drill you weilded
breaking apart stone and concrete
you destroyed buildings
laying way for new beginnings
grime covered and dusty
you drilled your way into my heart
but never the gentle one,
you broke it all apart.

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  • mshairi
    April 26, 2007
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    nice work KAr,as usual....u have a way with words