There is always something waiting at the other end of darkness...
its pain cried out, its sadness choked
yet we denied its hurt and turned our backs
leaving to rot in the in the grave
its anger consumed its heart and soul
it craved for revenge
it desired our suffering,
no, it desired our existence
you could say we deserve this curse
no matter how much we greived
it wont change
it already sold its soul
it stayed where we abandoned it
never removing its 'cloak'
it will haunt us forever
and never let us forget its hurt
this is how we created our destruction
through our creation of this DEATH
our hatred created it
now hatred is all we have
Author notes
i think i missed something. i did my best with the wordsbut i have a bad vocab so . . .
tell if you can see what missing.
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Comments
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to tell the truth, i truly believe that the world has turned cold and that we created our own descruction. if your to coward to face 'DEATH' then you shoulda thought about that before you turned cold.
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[Side note, my vocabulary is only decent because I read the dictionary once and I read my dad's books for fun.] I think it's really good, disturbingly true.
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hmmm... not quite sure what's meant to be missing i'm afraid. it's a good write, even if the vocab isn't perfect.
well done and good lcuk
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